It was perfect. Completely and utterly, hand on heart fucking PERFECT! It had everything in it; it had the drama, the tension, the power, the violence, the emotion, and you just pulled it all together in the most spectacularly stunning way imaginable! From a pure writing point of view, I'd personally say that this chapter was possibly the best thing you've ever written, and as a major fan of this fic, I can only agree with that more! It was absolute perfection, and so damn totally worth the wait, believe me!
The beginning with the Guns was just heartwrenchingly beautiful and utterly stunning, I can barely put into words how much I adored it! The way that you're building up the history of their relationship, giving us a little bit more of information on Alex's past (which btw, I'm so seriously loving! I'd kill to find out exactly how he changed from being all evil and nasty to being like he is now), and just weaving it together to show the depth of the love and the care they have is just breathtaking! You write them to perfection, and the emotion and connection that you conveyed just highlighted that bond between them so beautifully! :)
Man, I don't even LIKE the Hardys, but the way that you're showing them in this - especially Jeff and his history - is just making it impossible for me to not like them! I love the way that you've built up the pack, and the connections and the bonds between both the individual pairings and the pack itself is really awesome! I like the way you have it being quite light and fun, then you have such a stark contrast to the darkness and the power that Randy shows at the end; it keeps you totally offguard and makes you want more so bad!
I fucking love the fact that Alex and Mike beat up those two little snot-nosed brats!!! That entire section was totally amazing with the fight and the dominance that was showed, and I love how you found an excuse to let Alex get payback lol! The little details you had as well, like the thrill in the vamps, the rules and traditions, and the fact that you let Alex and Mike have some fun made it so enjoyable!
I have been waiting for the execution for what seems like forever, and it was fucking worth the wait! It was dark, it was brutal, it was bloody, and Randy was just fucking perfect here! He absolutely oozed power and control, and you really solidified his place as the alpha of the pack in just the most intense way! I totally adore the way though that you show the division between being a normal member of the pack and the alpha with the loneliness he's feeling despite his status, it just adds so much more dimension to him!
I know I've been rambling on forever, but I couldn't help it! This fic is developing into something really, really special, and I totally mean that! The characters, the plot, the details, the relationships, the history, the emotions, you've spun it all together and created possibly one of the greatest fics - certainly the best AU fic - I have ever had the pleasure of reading! I swear you are driving me crazy, and I'm seriously absolutely craving the next part! I can't wait to see what else you have tucked up that sleeve of yours!!! :D
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It was perfect. Completely and utterly, hand on heart fucking PERFECT! It had everything in it; it had the drama, the tension, the power, the violence, the emotion, and you just pulled it all together in the most spectacularly stunning way imaginable! From a pure writing point of view, I'd personally say that this chapter was possibly the best thing you've ever written, and as a major fan of this fic, I can only agree with that more! It was absolute perfection, and so damn totally worth the wait, believe me!
The beginning with the Guns was just heartwrenchingly beautiful and utterly stunning, I can barely put into words how much I adored it! The way that you're building up the history of their relationship, giving us a little bit more of information on Alex's past (which btw, I'm so seriously loving! I'd kill to find out exactly how he changed from being all evil and nasty to being like he is now), and just weaving it together to show the depth of the love and the care they have is just breathtaking! You write them to perfection, and the emotion and connection that you conveyed just highlighted that bond between them so beautifully! :)
Man, I don't even LIKE the Hardys, but the way that you're showing them in this - especially Jeff and his history - is just making it impossible for me to not like them! I love the way that you've built up the pack, and the connections and the bonds between both the individual pairings and the pack itself is really awesome! I like the way you have it being quite light and fun, then you have such a stark contrast to the darkness and the power that Randy shows at the end; it keeps you totally offguard and makes you want more so bad!
I fucking love the fact that Alex and Mike beat up those two little snot-nosed brats!!! That entire section was totally amazing with the fight and the dominance that was showed, and I love how you found an excuse to let Alex get payback lol! The little details you had as well, like the thrill in the vamps, the rules and traditions, and the fact that you let Alex and Mike have some fun made it so enjoyable!
I have been waiting for the execution for what seems like forever, and it was fucking worth the wait! It was dark, it was brutal, it was bloody, and Randy was just fucking perfect here! He absolutely oozed power and control, and you really solidified his place as the alpha of the pack in just the most intense way! I totally adore the way though that you show the division between being a normal member of the pack and the alpha with the loneliness he's feeling despite his status, it just adds so much more dimension to him!
I know I've been rambling on forever, but I couldn't help it! This fic is developing into something really, really special, and I totally mean that! The characters, the plot, the details, the relationships, the history, the emotions, you've spun it all together and created possibly one of the greatest fics - certainly the best AU fic - I have ever had the pleasure of reading! I swear you are driving me crazy, and I'm seriously absolutely craving the next part! I can't wait to see what else you have tucked up that sleeve of yours!!! :D